Open Poetry #31 |
A lingering memory |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I see you from afar, my heart speaks such words I blush But I stare and dream and wait in hope, with fate and time How complex this heart and the strings which perform to love How sad the moments we don’t touch or let our feelings ignite ……………………………………… A moment of touch granted this memory, yet feeling of regret As life passes on and then onward to where honour and duty does lead Paths crossed, but guilt and emotion led back to home and safety But such a moment, such a moment, though basically innocent, still shines within And you are still my valentine |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
How wonderful to see your poetry this morning, so lovely and filled with tender emotion...yes! this was a great poem for your Valentine....perfect as always! Sometimes a touch is worth a thousand words... ~ARH love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Such sweet tender moments our memories keep forever !! this was so beautifully expressed , I have such a Valentine , he will be forever in heart and mind Hope |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Such a lovely write,,,brings a tear to the eye, a smile to the lips, and tugs at your heart,,,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Rick! As always your words swept me off my feet. A truly beautiful write my friend. "To love, is to receive a glimpse into heaven" Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
ARH, lovely to hear from you my friend, amazing how some thoughts linger on and the past comes back to remind us, thanks for your visit, hope you are well and having luck with love. Dear Hope, thank you for your reply, forever in heart and mind, how true a statement, great you could visit tonight, very much appreciated. Dear Michelle, thank you for this reply, it was great, very much appreciated. Hi Seymour, I appreciate your visit and comment, thankyou my friend. My good friend Sue, thank you, your words mean so much to me, always appreciate your visit and reply, be well my friend and take care. Till we meet again. To you all my friends, thanks for the visit, may you all stay well. Sincerely Rick |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, God Bless You, sweet friend, as always your loving poetry shows a very sensitive, glowing heart deep inside of you that always shines true with dedicated love, sweet friend, your Valentine will forever be blessed to be yours, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rick, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Rick my friend, how in the bejeezus have you been? I hope everything's fine. Absolutely wonderful poem here, as always. I've always been a big fan. I hope everything works out with you and your sweet valentine... And that life has been treating you well... Well, you take care friend, and best of luck to you, Richy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you just put your heart on your sleeve with more quiet intensity and passion than anyone I've ever known and how your soft touch always warms my heart good to see you friend...hope you are well |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Rick, this is wonderfully written and touches some chords in my own heart. True magic lasts forever ... and helps to go on, even if we walk separate paths. Love, Margherita |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Noah, thank you for these kind words from your wonderful heart of love, your words are always very much cherished. Richy old mate, I've been great, hope that you have been as well, it's been a while, I have not written all too much, but have enjoyed it when I have. Thanks for your comments, as always, very much appreciated. My dear Dixie, this was beautiful what you just said to me, for that thank you very much, I do see you as a true friend, thank you for always being there, take care my friend and be well and lucky at love. Dear Margherita, great to see you here my friend, thank you for your kind words, they were very much appreciated. To you all my friends, all your comments are always very much heart felt, thanks for your time, I love you all. Sincerely Rick |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Rick There are so many people who are inspired by your words and I am one of those people. You have a special way of touching our hearts. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sue, thanks for your special words once again, I alway get a smile and a feel of well being with your replies, thanks for that. Take care and be well. Sincerely Rick |
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