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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Manic junk yard night angry black dogs howl, growl at me 22 pills everyday angry black dogs please go away. ©2004 Grover Gall |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done. A powerful write in so few words. believe in what your heart feels... |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
I have had them black dogs after me a time or two...well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Grover, this sounds sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all who face these situations psychologically, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Grover, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I just saw them run over that hill. I hope they don't come back... ~K~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh my, so youre the one living next door to me  ...oh how i know where these words come from, youve conveyed the feeling so well |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very good, Grover!  ........jo |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Grover, You have such diversity in your writing styles, all strong. This left me with compassion, hoping all would settle Have a good rest-of-the-week, Sadie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love to read you! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Grover, it's good to read you again. Your poems feel so real. I could almost hear the grpwlings ofthose "black dogs" of your feelings . I hope all is well with you.  Hugs Ethel |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Very powerful write indeed! Nice to see such intensity in so few words! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Grover! Howsaboutahug? ~ it's free for the taking!  Warm hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Grover..powerful write here.. and you did it in 'twenty or less'.  Need a hug? ~ Time has cast a spell on you, So you won't ever forget me ~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you have captured this well...the haunting hounds of the pound of the mind... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
22 pills...angry black dogs....hmmm?...do you know me?...LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not all will understand. But I do. Thank you, Grover. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Effectively done. You show more in this short one than you could have done in two pages. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
You do have a cool style, Grover! |
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