Open Poetry #31 |
On recycling |
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I believe That love is boundless As plentiful here on Earth As water That there is as much now As there ever was That G-d was generous in Genesis And poured a supernal bucketful Of each upon the world Leaving them To seek their own level And us To do with this allotment What we will Spending millennia Utilizing all that was close at hand Eschewing the quantity held aloft And that which hides itself Under preponderances The notion that we have been Polluting Recovering Tainting And recycling this smallest share Has me inquire Of the ice in my whiskey “Could some part of you Ever been a brides’ conjugal gift?” “A mothers’ tears?” “Or even The sweat from Jesus’ brow”? |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...the liquid butterfly effect... Interesting thoughts here, Ed -- and good to read you again. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"The notion that we have been Polluting Recovering Tainting And recycling this smallest share Has me inquire Of the ice in my whiskey “Could some part of you Ever been a brides’ conjugal gift?” “A mothers’ tears?” “Or even The sweat from Jesus’ brow”?" Ed?... Just...wow... I love the way your mind works... would love to peek in there, even for a brief visit...smile Love this, Ed... "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Has me inquire Of the ice in my whiskey “Could some part of you Ever been a brides’ conjugal gift?” “A mothers’ tears?” “Or even The sweat from Jesus’ brow”?" Liked the "continuation" of the theme from 'Counting sheep'. Glad I stopped in tonight. Enjoyed both a lot Ed... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx Interesting doors and metaphors, enjoyed, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Baby, seems to me you are onto something here: Eschewing the quantity held aloft And that which hides itself Under preponderances (sounds like this writer I kinda know *wink*) In true boundless fashion, you have succeeded beautifully with this *smile* |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Softly intellectual... brilliant. Grover. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
happy to see you again |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This ... is a very interesting write Ed. Enjoyed. Nice to see you around M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I believe That love is boundless As plentiful here on Earth As water That there is as much now As there ever was Me, too, Ed...me too!! Hey, it sure is good to see you here. Hugs Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Oh Ed, I have always seen the water as the crystal tears of God, sweet friend, His saline tears to me is pure and recycles all to itself and makes clean all that is dirty, yay! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Long live wranx! Long may he pollute these here blue pages! Nicely writ, Ed Ed ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Interesting write. Enjoyed the read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
AMEN!!!!!! You are so right! ~ARH love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yee-HA!!! He's back! *S* And in fine form... this is excellent! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe He put too much of the stuff on earth...I've barely escaped drowning...walking along, minding my own business...and KAPLOOSH!! I wasn't even searching for it great piece and I"m glad you're back |
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