Open Poetry #31 |
Mud Fence (inspired by Ratleader's email) |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
“The grass is always greener” or so they say ‘tis so on the side we call the other and ‘they’ must surely know There are times when our gazing just doesn’t make much sense and we refrain from grazing as we sit upon that fence That fence we’ll climb clean over or so we thought we would to fairer fields of clover… Alas, that fence was made of mud The moral of my story is quite plain for all to see You might have to get a little muddy In your quest for strawberries |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
steavenr Excellent write, enjoyed very much. |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
But a creeping vine, my friend. Cute write. McLean |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I LOVE IT!!!! A friend just emailed me, said I needed to break from what I was doing and go see this... they were right! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is neat. I love they way you play with the metaphors. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... What truths you write! *S* I like this very much... you guys are insuring a visit to the farmers market will be in my weekend plans. *S* |
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