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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-01-25 11:04 AM

Where It Begins

Thoughts held back
Far too long
Hearts yet to hear
But one love’s song
Somehow a soul
Is now set to wing
In some wise way,
Light will bring
A sound of rejoice
Sounds of voice
Fate, by choice
Where it begins
                            When it begins
                                                       Here

Dipping thoughts
In candle’s light
Seeking within
Inner sight
Here, you know
This harbor home
In the quiet
Fantasies roam
A sound of rejoice
Sounds of voice
Fate, by choice
Where it begins
                            When it begins
                                                       Here

Some will say
There is a key
To all of life’s
Great mysteries
I would know it
Hold it in hand
For so awesome,
It must be, a
Tender love, in some
Ancient history, in
A sound of fading rejoice
Sounds of bygone voice
Fate, oh and by choice
Where it began
                            When it began
                                                       There

So, please sit beside,
Let thoughts emerge
Though tears may fall
Love shall merge
In stand of flight
Upon the verge
Come twilight
Dreams find home

For in sound, rejoice
As sounds of voice
Decry fate, but a choice,
Where it begins
                            When it begins
                                                       Here

~*~

Dedicated in four parts:

To CJ, for trying to understand even when
I appear “obsessed” with writing;

To two friends who are going to push me
through a window, calling it a door…

,
Thank you, Jack & MaryLu;

To Louise, for working so hard with me
on all I have set before her;

And to the poets here in Passions,
who choose to believe not only in themselves,
But in others, and encourage all to strive.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-01-25 11:07 AM

and to you for all you have given in inspiration to each of us, unselfishly,
never wavering...

Thanx Sun...

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

2 posted 2004-01-25 11:11 AM

what a warm picture and an environment characterized in words of the same...

you are such a writer, such a GOOD writer, and this piece is evidence of the beauty in your soul.

McLean

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2004-01-25 11:31 AM

enjoyed

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2004-01-25 11:39 AM

"...if I whisper, will you listen?"

Yes.

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-01-25 11:44 AM

And to you dear one..
for all that you continue to give to us..
for your encouragement and constant inspiration.
Yes...I listen, perhaps even moreso when you whisper.
Hugs YOU!

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2004-01-25 12:04 PM

How warm this makes me feel...ah, forget the hot chocolate now...I don't need it.

Just lovely...and thank you for all you do.

Patricia

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-01-25 12:55 PM

what a beautiful tribute

I nod my head in knowing

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2004-01-25 01:01 PM

Karilea...To you, for the faith unwarvering of a candle that does not go out.

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

9 posted 2004-01-25 02:36 PM

This is so beautiful Sunshine and it would make a great song too!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2004-01-25 06:38 PM

(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is wonderful, sweet friend, it is important to know where it begam, not where it begins, as it already has always happened and we must be part of it! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, such a wonderfully dedicative piece, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!