Open Poetry #31 |
Of Humor |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Of Humor Within the bubble that we blow Lies the humor of its sew It has the feel of carbonate Like a sizzle of elate It tickles us a sense of feel The oddest feeling of appeal Lifts us up within a state The highest of gesticulate But do not ask make sense of it It is a special bird of wit And changes color with each form There is no body birth for norm It plays upon articulate The storage is of different freight And weighs upon the scale of blind That titters the state of mind So laugh for it is wonders bliss Implosive as a lovers kiss |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Right on the mark, Sy. I wish we had planted some smooches on 'Deer at the appropriate time - lol. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Laughter is good therapy Sy. And so are your wonderful writes. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You wear this mantle very well... Good morning, Sy! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent excellent write dear Sy! You are a very amazing writer... ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
Witty, funny, a nice read. Kie |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this so much, Seymour... Humor is certainly an excellent steam valve... I couldn't work around attorneys without it! LOL |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ah...yes...laughter doeth good like a medicine...(and that ain't just from the RD ) well written reminder for good mental health |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LngJhnAg LOL Me too. well maybe next time. scorpio Thank you my friend. Sunshine, Love you too. Nancy, I'll take the hugs and tea. Kie Nice of you to say so. suthern Glad you enjoyed. steavenr Thank you my friend. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Within the bubble that we blow Lies the humor of its sew It has the feel of carbonate Like a sizzle of elate It tickles us a sense of feel The oddest feeling of appeal Lifts us up within a state The highest of gesticulate ========================== Could those verses be any cooler???? I'd get fizzy and bubbly with you and Randy anytime LOL There is a pleasure in the pathless woods. |
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celestecat Junior Member
since 2004-02-02
Posts 29 |
very well written |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Seymour, there's always room for humor in comedy, and you well represent the whole of it, yay, God Bless You, this is uplifting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Wonderfyl to see your reply, hope all is well. WWRS celestecat Thank you so much. Thank you Noah. |
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