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Open Poetry #31

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Kazeru
Junior Member

since 2003-12-16

Posts 31

0 posted 2004-02-03 01:25 PM

Soft gentle breeze
Please caress my soul
make me forget everyday life
Ohw, waves of the ocean
Wash away the darkness
I found within my heart
And you, my setting sun
Cleanse me with your golden rays
Make me pure again
You ask where am I?
Nowhere special
Just a place in my mind...

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-02-03 01:31 PM

Kazeru -- this is outstanding. Flows absolutely beautifully. .......jo

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2004-02-03 01:57 PM

It sounds like a special place to me... we need those mental retreats. *S* I like this very much!

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