Open Poetry #31 |
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Clouds Like Gods . . . . .senryu |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
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The clouds shine like gods; "Come down, share with us," we cry. Yet when they do: fog.... |
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This inspired by a reply of icebox' to something of mine.... Should have posted it separately, 'box -- 'twas good enough! /pip/Forum88/HTML/000417.html ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...Indeed! I liked this! It's supposed to rain alot...I've been waiting. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ok, where is the rainex, fogex and Fedex? Seriously, a good point made herein... |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
fog.... like, confusion? Or, like, blindness? Maybe both. Yes, both, I think! Excellent write! McLean |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
So true! Grover. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
RatL., The gods must have the fog working in full blast over here! Some mornings, the roads, hardly visible! Enjoyed your write, as always. ~Sadelite~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is so cool...and so true on many levels...excellent |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) But with the dew comes moisture, and moisture brings dew to the earth, and there we know that the gods are listening, yay, God Bless You, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
can't help it, rotflmao! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
awsum,,,,,and more true than we'd like to think Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
can't say anything because my mouth just fell open stunning piece! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nay...misty surreal where cool dew-kiss clings briefly that a dream wanders... ~*~ Heh. You inspired me! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
On tiny cat feet Soft as a lovers first kiss Morning after mind Nicely done |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And I suddenly see the correlation of clouds, gods... and bosses. *G* This is wonderful, my friend... No one can match your ability to encompasse so many levels in so few words... I've read this and smiled... read it and mourned... will read it again and again and admire. *S* |
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