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A Muddy Pool Of Emotions
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A Muddy Pool Of Emotions |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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Have you ever seen a pool during a storm unsettled… muddy water then… after the storm it seems that everything is back to normal still… the sand in the pool only needs a little wind to be disturbed again almost as if the sand is afraid to settle down this is how I feel deep inside unsettled… in a muddy pool... of emotions... |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Not only have I seen said happen,,I see your point as well, good job Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Neeraja - yes, I've seen the muddy waters, yet slowly they fade. Best to you... BC |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Have you ever seen a pool during a storm unsettled… muddy water then… after the storm it seems that everything is back to normal still… the sand in the pool only needs a little wind to be disturbed again almost as if the sand is afraid to settle down I began highlighting my favorite parts, and it is completely the whole thing, my friend. This is by far my favorite description of this...this..."unnamed" thing. I LOVE how you have said it! The stormy residue inside me does remain little does it take to stir each painful little grain Enjoy me today as tomorrow's forecast calls for quite a drop in pressure as a cold front does befall over my personal waterfront but rest assured my friend next week's forecast looks better and the residue will settle again. I JUST LOVE YOUR THOUGHTS and you are so inspiring! Does everyone have this universal feeling, I wonder. Good to the last drop! McLean |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
wow... thanks for the sweet comments on my poem... and McLean... I am blushing... you are too kind!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
almost as if the sand is afraid to settle down ~*~ Almost, indeed. Neeraja, you've written many a lovely poem, but this, I think, should be, and is hereby proclaimed, a  and libraried! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja A good analogy, enjoyed. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
nicely expressed and well written. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...me too good expression here |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Neeraja, this is sad but beautiful, sweet friend, but also think of it this way, as the colors are all there even when it rains and despite the uneasiness of the waters the hope is there and won't leave! (smiles) God less You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is a nice, introspective write...thanks for the glimpse...great imagery |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Neeraja -- good metaphor and expression.  |
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