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Emily (Response to Amherst)
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Emily (Response to Amherst) |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
who can take a soul from her? not one of us...she has many more who can make her love for life? not one of us...shes no ones wife Even Emily had bad days Days when words would glow Like volcanos full of love Destroyed by the flow Even Emily had bad days I see it in her lovely eyes You could be a feint in love For the detached in the skies Outflanked by the dreams Parachuting right on by |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I really enjoyed this...it flowed so naturally. Loved the line about the volcanoes |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very pleasant. Grover. |
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unwantedspork Junior Member
since 2004-02-02
Posts 24 |
Nice. I flows together so well, and i loved the nice metaphores! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Hey, winter...welcome back! Missed you and your wondrous writes! This one is very nice...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Who doesn't have bad days? That is why we are all here for each other and compassion helps bring friends together and builds and strengthens bondings! (big angel hugs) This is a wonderful write of her, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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