Open Poetry #31 |
Candlelight ..... and tulips |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* Red tulips whisper a warm welcome. The candle is lit, its flame dances to our breath. Shadows and light perform a magical play on the wall. Time stops while life is lived. The candle consumes itself in tears of deep devotion. The flame’s last flicker meets the tulips’ gaze. Eyes wide open now, they tell a story of merging souls, of burning candles and of love. * |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...one of my favorites...James |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
Pure magic! I saw the whole scene and it gave me goosebumps. Fresh beautiful tulips, my mind drifts away....Kie |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I love tulips. And, this poem is just beautiful. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - a'hhhh yes, candlelight and tulips, romance into the night, lovely... BC |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A beautiful poem! Grover. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely, my friend. jwesley |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Dearest Margherita...no one does it better than you. This is exquisite and magical. Thank you for transporting me to a realm of beauty and awe. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I've always seen tulips as flowers of happiness because they can bloom so early before spring and cheer everyone up, yay! (does happy spring dance) God Bless You, sweet friend, this deeply brought a smile to my heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Margherita, this was sheer magic! hugs to you, jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you my dear poet friends. Enjoyed finding your loving comments here. Love and have a beautiful week. Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Deeply felt Margherita...a wonderful shared connection of love. Love, Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a perfect ending! I love this! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, m'dear, as I clicked into this poem, a lovely little fluid flute came playing over the radio, and just seemed to make your tulips dance... Coincidence? or *magic*? |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Lovely Margherita! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dear Margherita, your poetry always dances so prettily! Enjoyed this very much~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so pretty, Margherita. Your poetry is always so peaceful feeling. Hugs Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all for your loving words, dear ones. Sunshine-Karilea, I love the flute ... I am sure some magic does happen to those who watch the world with an open heart, as you do! Love, Margherita |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Oh my goodness, how can one write so beautifully? Sadie |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is ever lovely as is your heart.... ~~**~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...how lovely...much enjoyed. Hugs~
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Time stops while life is lived. The candle consumes itself in tears" I loved these lines....and really enjoyed the poem -- it's uplifting. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very pretty |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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