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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-03-02 10:46 AM

Erasing all memories,
even those fresh with feel
to teach a lesson.

That what seems isn't always,
and although preferences exist
there is more madness in the word
than the expressions
seen face to face.

For all the give and take,
I now give...up.
For the taking isn't there
and the knowing isn't shared
and the weakness that is you
needs to be erased
so that all scars can heal.

And in the word of tomorrow
there may again be promise.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-03-02 10:53 AM

why wait until tomorrow, the next second is coming very quickly! smiles

Good write

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2004-03-02 12:12 PM

For all the give and take,
I now give...up.
For the taking isn't there
and the knowing isn't shared
and the weakness that is you
needs to be erased
so that all scars can heal.

And in the word of tomorrow
there may again be promise.
ys ma'am..I think you are on to something here..

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

3 posted 2004-03-02 12:21 PM

For all the give and take,
I now give...up.
For the taking isn't there
and the knowing isn't shared
and the weakness that is you
needs to be erased
so that all scars can heal.

And in the word of tomorrow
there may again be promise.

Loved this. You have more talent than I could ever hope to achieve.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-03-02 12:37 PM

I relate well, I understand too deep

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-03-02 03:23 PM

Wynter~
You know what ?
I LOVE the softness of your strength~

Yep .... that's what I meant to say alright !...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-03-02 03:25 PM

When the taking isn't there, why stay around? I agree with you, and tomorrow can be a lot better when yesterday isn't dragging you down.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2004-03-02 04:21 PM

(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, and I truly believe with all my heart tomorrow will be just the day all you desire comes swimming to you and fills your heart with peace and comfort! (sigh) There shall be a rainbow, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

8 posted 2004-03-02 05:08 PM

oh I like this, very much, from the title to the end, very nicely done lady

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