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...GOT LOVE?
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...GOT LOVE? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 GOT LOVE? (A Candy Heart Poem) By: Noah Eaton 2/13/03  Got love? Love has more nutrients than you can imagine Let this omnipresent potassium Bring a vision before you and lighten your spirit To offer comfort is the essential diet In leading a healthy and tranquil life It is always aceesable and you don't have to buy it And is not pasteurized or homogenized  Innocence and faith are like casein micelles So may your blood be enriched with this illustrious enzyme Let the calcium of the lamb consume and compel Let's find a place together where we can shine Let the living proof be your hemoglobin Let your adequate daily intake be a big warm hug So now that I mention it again Got love?  "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
very cool - lovely poem - lovely images a combo made in heaven  |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm...love this Noah. Got Love? Heck yeah! But still it is nice to be reminded of it. Thank-you dear friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Noah, this was so cute -- but also, beautiful! hug to you, friend |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was beautiful Noah, thank you for writing and sharing |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Another awesome poem my friend. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Noah, this is fantastic. Got love? Love has more nutrients than you can imagine Let this omnipresent potassium Bring a vision before you and lighten your spirit Love and hugs. Margherita |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
The marketer in me LOVES this muchly! I think, like the "got milk" commercials...you should have evidence on a spokes person for this. I love your pictures, as always, but I was thinking more like a single person, with, instead of a milk mustache, some significant, over-stated evidence of "love"... Like, a pregnant woman, smiling, and holding her tummy, with the quotation above: "Got Love?" Or...an elderly couple walking hand in hand down a beautifully lit street sidewalk, with crepe myrtles overhanging in full bloom...and we're looking at them from behind....and there's cupid's arrow sticking out of them... hahaha.... This is adorable, nice play on words, and...moving...to think of it this way. Magnificent! McLean |
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