Open Poetry #31 |
It Just Is |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
It Just Is loving you was never easy but I never expected it to be it would have betrayed the point and casual is something that covers real appearance but that is where it stops for there is nothing casual in a heart naked the stripping of layers way past the cloth of desire to where it just is |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Exquisite, Helen...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, and this just is so full of expression -- you're a master of laying things bare and confronting truth. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are so good at reality |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
nodding-- and yes, those ashes fly from the phoenix wings... and it ain't right--it ain't wrong--it just IS. (and now maybe I might sleep...sighs, hugs and smiles to you h) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"for there is nothing casual in a heart naked the stripping of layers way past the cloth of desire to where it just is" Yes... Hugs to you, lady... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
way past desire . . . |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
Your words are so true. I enjoyed your poem, very much. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) This is sad but well-written, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, God Bless You, it should never have to be this way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
These experiences are just adding to how much we learn and think about ourselves. How very nicely done Helen. (I hope you are much better too.) |
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