Open Poetry #31 |
I'm Sorry |
C_ROK06 Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 49 |
I tell you close to nothing of what I feel, what I go through Instead I push you aside, and I turn to another I never once thought of how it made you feel To see me rely on him Did it really bother you that much? I’m sorry for not seeing that all this time I had been searching for someone to confide in I did not see that you where right there With your shoulder ready With your heart open I did not see that you too where in pain Instead I was so engrossed in my own feelings I paid no attention to yours That was my mistake Now my pain has dulled Yet yours grows steadier still Now I am on the other end And feel the way you must have felt I feel our bond has weakened And my heart aches at this realization Somehow I wish things would become right again I wish our friendship would be strong again There are things I still wish to tell you But most important I’m sorry "So let us then try to climb the mountain,not by stepping on what is below us,but to pull us up at what is above us,for my part at the stars"-MCE |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is a very heartfelt apology, its one that i myself have tried to say... im glad you could put into words something so difficult to admit... lovely |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
C_ROK, very strong and intense write with lots of energy. Hope it worked! Thank you for this! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
C_ROK06 Good write enjoyed the read. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed this good writing. Welcome to Passions! ........jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I did not see that you where right there With your shoulder ready With your heart open It's easy to not see... especially when your attentions are elsewhere... especially when that ready shoulder and open heart don't speak up. *S* Beautiful apology! Welcome to Passions! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is touching |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Saying sorry is the first step. Love the poem. Great piece that is very heartfelt. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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