Open Poetry #31 |
Winters fire for you |
EverRuss Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 66Indiana |
The outside, A haze of dense gray Arisen over the fresh snow Pale, white, soft in color Harsh, is whipping cold winds This kiss from I to you, warms Uncorupted by the outside This fire burns inside, melting Turning all hopes, desires, a real Through the eternal darkness, of the harsh winter I see your face, Ruby eyes Cutting through the rich entrapment of your beauty Your form takes place among the outlines Of hope, of longing A transparent ache screams Echos through the night Your heart has struck a spark, My fire rages for you. If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful! TD |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Great poem... romance with some depth to it. I enjoyed reading it. The imagery is excellent! Grover. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write....much enjoyed! Hugs~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Russell, this is beautiful, sweet friend, passion can indeed ake hostage on any heart and I wish for all the gratest joy to come to you! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Russell, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
EverRuss -- this is passion. The range of emotion went from an ember to a bond fire! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good piece! |
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