Open Poetry #31 |
Shattered Glass |
Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
[This'll be the first poem I've posted here in Pip for months upon months. How excited! ] Rain streams down, Across a broken mirror Rivers form Between the shards Your reflection is broken, Like your spirit, When viewed in shattered glass The shards are sharp, Test the edge Across your skin The streams of rain Are tainted red Teardrops and raindrops Who can tell the difference, As they fall? Not the shattered glass, That portrays it all In broken images It's a long way down, When hope is gone Stand on the edge And watch it crumble, As the rain wears it away If you wait long enough, You'll fall, too But waiting takes too long- You'd rather jump Seconds turn to minutes, And minutes turn to days Dawn 'till dusk, Dusk 'till dawn, It's a long way down, When hope is gone The edges are sharp Hold the shards And view your choices, In shattered glass But realize- That broken images Are only parts And behind a broken spirit, Lies a broken heart Shards can be collected, Red rivers washed away Hearts can be healed, With time, And love The clouds will part, And after rain comes sun, Just wait Take my hand, You don't have to jump The clouds are parting Feel the warmth of the sun The shards are sharp- So let them go Look up, and see, The rain has passed Did you see this, In shattered glass? [By the way, Sunshine, if you read this, I tried to email you- hopefully I did it right. Yes, I could manage to screw even that up!] It's not only cowardly to run... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Amara Interesting write enjoyed the read. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Thanks for capturing something only a few can understand. Grover. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Much within this ... such truth... and BTW, I changed that one line, thanx! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Nice, Amara...thank you! And, welcome back! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Enjoyed. This was pretty heavy, lot's of deep emotion here. SG |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Stephanie, we are all soooooooo happy to have you back, dearest friend, you portray a mix of powerful emotions in this write, now take the shards and make stained glass from it, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stephanie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very emotional write, Amara. Yes, I just received your note today, and I've responded. With that, watch your e-mail for another greeting! Welcome back to Passions! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
Hey, and here I thought I wouldn't get any comments! I feel loved. Magnus- You're very welcome! Sunshine- Will do! Everyone else- Thanks for commenting! Yeah, it's pretty deep- written with a friend in mind. It's not only cowardly to run... |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
The poem was like a winding road. It left me anxious to see where it was going. Well worth the read. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Amara The images were so very vivid throughout your words which were so well written. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
But realize- That broken images Are only parts And behind a broken spirit, Lies a broken heart Shards can be collected, Red rivers washed away Hearts can be healed, With time, And love The clouds will part, And after rain comes sun, Just wait Absolutely *Brilliant* I am so happy to read you here Amara~ thank you for this wonderful poem of yours. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! glad that you have returned! |
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