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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2004-04-14 12:42 PM


Fourteen years old
he has given sorrow
to those who loved him

and those who could
not reach him in time....

in time to find out
what torture he held
inside

that would make him
hurt enough to take
his own life

and leave
the lives of others
in dissaray

a gun shot heard
and then another

and death rang out
through the halls
of the school

and a child cried
and a mother prayed

Dear Lord
hear their cries
heal their hearts

and let the echoes
fade
into the sounds
of empty corridors...

life was taken today

Lord in your name,
we pray.....

{So they will not be forgotten....}

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

© Copyright 2004 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
1 posted 2004-04-14 12:44 PM


this is lovely gal
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-04-14 12:47 PM


yes, we pray
Nightshade
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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
3 posted 2004-04-14 12:57 PM


Amen.
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-04-14 01:05 PM


..and the prayers will continue.
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