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Mist Clears
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Mist Clears |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
When the mist clears will blossoms be revealed this gray dawn- raindrops cling to bare branches reflecting the morning light. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yeah tis true, tis true, but I'm seeing buds clinging to those branches, all ready to hatch and sprout...  Lovely write |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Some really cool images here-- very much enjoyed (of course, I love short poems)!  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
With the passing mist The blossoms are then revealed White and pink sidewalks Sunlight makes rainbow branches On the droplets clinging there. Gloom |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
yeah tis true, tis true, but I'm seeing buds clinging to those branches, all ready to hatch and sprout... Yes, either they seem hesitant, or I am simply impatient.....Thank you Lee |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Some really cool images here-- very much enjoyed (of course, I love short poems)! Thank you Grover..... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
With the passing mist The blossoms are then revealed White and pink sidewalks Sunlight makes rainbow branches On the droplets clinging there. Gloom Nice, Your images certainly convey more optimism, then the lingering gray here in NYC Thank you ~P |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you say the grey is lingering, but light is reflected off the raindrops....? well then, shows you that even on the saddest of faces the tears still reflect promise.. good things come from downpour  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think they are confused by the weather...yesterday it felt like Christmas time again |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
mist or clarity what is there sustains without the spin of our longings |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
mist or clarity what is there sustains without the spin of our longings Seems as though our longings keep everything turning.....  |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I think they are confused by the weather...yesterday it felt like Christmas time again Yes Dixie, I went out this morning w/ my winter storm coat and heavy sweater  ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
you say the grey is lingering, but light is reflected off the raindrops....? well then, shows you that even on the saddest of faces the tears still reflect promise.. good things come from downpour Yes, Dawn...there is so much promise in the spring rain....;0 ~P |
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