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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2004-04-12 12:54 PM

Blind, in search of you..
I can't see the season wither.

Back when the days were less bleak,
you could tell by
my chewed nails that I'd been thinking
about ghosts..
The death made me shiver, and
you were no more warm but
I could accept it.. I could
find a
home in you...
..as haunted as it may be.

I will admit, I
borrowed time from you and
wasted it.
I painted your garden
and I destroyed it.
Everything I touch
drawls with sin..
everything
grows old much quicker,
and I felt no guilt until
I noticed ..
that the wind was no longer blowing,
the trees were not growing,
and the stench of nevermore
came creeping up my spine..
you were not there to warm me colder,
and there was no more time..

god, help me, I could not remember that
my inflictions may cause pain..

sugar trails but the ground is no longer sweet,
I've been
thinking
about ghosts...about honey and
fireflies
mixing light and syrup-like consistancy
to drown all I pass and
my sins will not be forgiven this time,
I can't redeem myself.

I will never comfort you in fear,
no longer will I hydrate you with
soullessy cried tears..
You would not remember, anyway..
so I
will let you die today..

I've been thinking about
ghosts..

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-04-12 01:02 AM

Reminds me of the curse of Midas...

and yes, I, too, feel that I'm contagiously,

fatally flawed...

You "wow" me.

majnu

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since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2004-04-12 01:39 AM

interesting. a lament and aplogy, but not nearly unselfish and selfpitying. this will stay with me.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-04-12 01:53 AM

you were no more warm but
I could accept it.. I could
find a
home in you...
..as haunted as it may be.

Yup...Wow!

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

swatcatpettus
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since 2004-04-12

Posts 57
CA

4 posted 2004-04-12 01:57 AM

deep

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-12 02:12 AM

and I'm sure you have a few ghosts thinking about you too Meg

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-04-12 12:14 PM

Meghan~

'I will admit, I
borrowed time from you and
wasted it.'

Oh how this thought leaped from the page to grab me in sad recall~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-04-12 01:59 PM

I love reading you...always.

Eric

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

8 posted 2004-04-13 10:35 AM

You're talented, very nice.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2004-04-13 10:59 AM

Haunting write Meg...much enjoyed.
~Smiles Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2004-04-13 11:46 AM

"I noticed ..
that the wind was no longer blowing,
the trees were not growing,
and the stench of nevermore
came creeping up my spine..
you were not there to warm me colder,
and there was no more time.."

every time I read you, I wish I could write like you

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2004-04-13 01:26 PM

Deeply soulful writing -- don't be so hard on yourself. What a gift your poetry is!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2004-04-13 03:35 PM

You are in a poetic league of your own, m'dear! I read each one of your poems at least twice! I couldn't possibly absorb it all with just one read! There is so much to ponder and appreciate!

EA

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

13 posted 2004-04-13 07:16 PM

Is this an apparition before me? Or is it Meghan back to grace us with another haunting tome?

Good to read you again kid....

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

14 posted 2004-04-13 10:39 PM

blind in search of you,
the haunting remains knawing beneath at the empty ache
you tell it well

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

15 posted 2004-04-13 11:05 PM

I was compelled to read this several times,
each time finding more... Excellently expressed.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

16 posted 2004-04-15 03:29 AM

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

17 posted 2004-04-15 09:43 AM

WOW!!! is right you are AWESOME!!!

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

18 posted 2004-04-15 10:59 AM

Wow! Meghan, your voice is so strong here that I am hearing you...your images piece to the bone...beautiful write...~P

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