Open Poetry #31 |
My Mistakes |
pammy Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 50California |
I sit here now ashamed and broken, I didnt know you could say such terrible things, But my actions have been stupid, and i guess that i deserved it, Now all i can do is mend my ways. You were there with love and devotion, You told me i saved your life. That you loved me so much, and that that would always stay the same, But now im the one what has changed. i changed for the worst and aacted so unreal, You couldn't understand why I'd hide my natural appeal. But i thought that i had to, to stay safe and wanted. But by acting this way i almost lost those who truely wanted "me" Im sorry for my mistakes, I can not take them back, but i can say I've learned from them. I've learned to do what is truely "me" and not to take youfor granted. I've found out that you loved me before i cahnged, and through all of this you love me still. ~*Pammy*~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Well said! It's wonderful when we meet people who care for us unconditionally. It's sounds like you have met such a person, and appreciate that person. I enjoyed your poem. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
heartfelt write |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sounds like an unconditional love to me. Yes, it is a very real feeling write. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful heartfelt realization Hope |
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