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A Touch of Paradise
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A Touch of Paradise |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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Comforting tones of conversation are lightly tossed between us at the end of the day on the edge of the night Twilight is upon us our tasks at an end the cool shades of evening give rest to our souls The children are sleeping and we are simply being you and I together a moment alone And under the great cosmos that covers the night it is just the two of us a touch of Paradise S.A.T. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes it is just that Susan. Enjoyed this soft write. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Beautiful. I'm glad this is the first I read after such a long time away from beauty. Good write! ~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
heavenly! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I agree..this is a touch of Paradise. |
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