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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York 
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I've been kind of 'absent' from here lately...I had a lot to take care of and finally was able to. This is about a recent boyfriend. I wrote this for him way back in October. We broke up last night. (4/12) ************************************************* I'd give my life for you Everything I own I'd give up for you Radiation of love blowing your way For you, I would die For you, I'd change Never letting go of anything I have for you Only collecting more love and more happiness Don't forget me when I leave, but remember For you, I'll be here forever for one reason, I love you. ******************************************** After 7 1/2 months, it proved false. I don't love him...and that was a problem, among many other things! "They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by." |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Love doesn't mean having to change for someone else....or die for them. You will see when the true thing comes along. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Sounds like we may be in for some "therapy writing." As the old song goes, "...breaking up is hard to do." (even if you're the one doing the breaking) Thanks for sharing... I've been there too and I know how it feels.  |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Thank you. I'm still a teen...17...so like I dunno...I felt that I didn't have a ring so I wasn't FORCED to stay in love with him...I did love him, but ya know how young hormones move...SWIFTLY! Thank you both! "They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Song of the Wind, I would like to echo both Nightshade's and Grover's responses! Kirah, I would like to add that I am so relieved that you extricated yourself from that "relationship" and remained intact! Now, it's onward and upward! Write that man right out of your hair! We'll be here for you, l'il darlin'!  Loves 'n healing hugs, Linda |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Lol. he was a good guy actually... "write that man right out of your hair" sounds like as song "i'm gonna wash that man right outta my hair.." good stuff. thank you! THANK YOU!!! "They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very good write. The immense enthusiasm fading to quiet friendship. Love, Margherita |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Yeah well some frienship it's turning out to be...he's being a weasel! (However you spell it) I just don't wanna deal with anything...thank you though. "They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by." |
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vega Junior Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 24wherever I lay my hat. |
Love is something that I don't think I shall ever understand, it evokes so many different emotions. I do know one thing though, don't try to change who you are , the right person will love you for that very reason. Take care..... |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
I think i'm gonna have to repost another poem..that i just posted recently...its entitled "...love..." Mucho thankos. Everyone has such great opinions and it really makes me smile and brighten my rainy day. Thank you! "They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the best part about being young is that you get to be fickle and enjoy the company of many different kinds of boys  It's all about learning what you like and don't like, so when you find "the one" you will know it's him |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
That is so true. I never ever heard that. I think that's brilliant. I like it...lol. Thanks Sea...finally everyone understands...or maybe its just me...i dont know... "They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by." |
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