Open Poetry #31 |
water drop |
mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I’m only a water drop I know I’m outside the draw I’m pulling your thoughts aside I follow your aim my name is the same I know of that shell it’s you I can tell Reach to my edge fluid and dread you’ll feel instead like falling you’re dead I’m bigger than you this drop won’t lie come enter my world we’re ALL - inside. The next time you see a water drop glide will it be me? or another gone by If nothing is something |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very intriguing write. Like this one a lot! JL |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, I agree, very interesting perspective. Enjoyed! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very interesting write. Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
so this is where all my fave dark ones have been hiding...all this time i thought you guys just ran out of ink! very nice one poe! catch you later - River sleep my precious slumber |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool |
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