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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-04-13 07:25 AM

Birth canal of vision
       Carries across the ruins
Of some cradled frozen lifetime
       If only just a ripple
A ripple of the best part of a day
                 YOU!
Where roads cannon sultry eyes
        Sustaining tea roses
A semblance of freedom, stringing hearts
        We glimpse déjà vu free-falling
               fragrance
Into lavished flames of jewels
       Splitting into atoms, white across the floor
Leaning towards a golden road
       In the folds of mauve images
Leaving stretch marks of time’s space all over
       Human consciousness into an ongoing
              Challenge and Surprise

                   Wanting me!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-04-13 08:51 AM

WOW!! Amazing write Lee...
Love the colors and images flashing in my mind.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 2004-04-13 09:48 AM

Yea, I agree with Enchantress....does leave images of stretch marks etc....LOL...just kidding...good write

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-04-13 10:21 AM

Lee~

'We glimpse déjà vu free-falling
               fragrance
Into lavished flames of jewels
       Splitting into atoms, white across the floor
Leaning towards a golden road
       In the folds of mauve images'

How very, very lovely this is~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA