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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2004-04-12 09:33 PM

She is visible when the earth spins night your way –
when reflection reveals her light;

gaze directly at her, she’ll dodge from view.
Let your gaze grow velvety,
she’ll fan stars into a peacock’s tail

and leave you dreaming in ancient tongues.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-04-12 10:14 PM

Corinne
Sometimes you just surprise me.

swatcatpettus
Member

since 2004-04-12

Posts 57
CA

2 posted 2004-04-12 10:18 PM

so unrealistic its realistic

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-04-13 01:33 AM

I don't know what to say...just incredible Corinne..you totally blow me away.. IWICWLU

adding this to my library...
actually adding YOU to my library.

WOW

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-13 02:25 AM

great piece! glad to see you writing again

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-04-13 10:32 AM

CorinneCorinne~
This is so total !

A flow off the tongue .... gorgeous, just gorgeous, lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-04-13 11:01 AM

Wow...just wow!
Good to read you here once again Corinne.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-04-13 11:02 AM

Amazing...talk about time travel...
with so few words, you've got my
mind spinning...

but that is how the good poets do it.

Teach me.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

8 posted 2004-04-13 11:27 AM

Thanks you guys! You are all so wonderful, so supportive, that's what I love about this place!

Made my day with your warmth, you all did!

Corinne

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2004-04-13 01:33 PM

Very nice write!
JL

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2004-04-13 02:19 PM

Always amazed by your work

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2004-04-13 02:41 PM

Hi, Corinne! This is a little beauty! ~ So ethereal! ~ and a very clever title!

This sky-watcher enjoyed your poetic portrayal of a comet's tail! lol

Warm hugs 'n smiles,
EA

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

12 posted 2004-04-13 02:51 PM

simply stunning!

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