Open Poetry #31 |
Cometary |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
She is visible when the earth spins night your way – when reflection reveals her light; gaze directly at her, she’ll dodge from view. Let your gaze grow velvety, she’ll fan stars into a peacock’s tail and leave you dreaming in ancient tongues. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne Sometimes you just surprise me. |
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swatcatpettus Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 57CA |
so unrealistic its realistic |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I don't know what to say...just incredible Corinne..you totally blow me away.. IWICWLU adding this to my library... actually adding YOU to my library. WOW Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great piece! glad to see you writing again |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CorinneCorinne~ This is so total ! A flow off the tongue .... gorgeous, just gorgeous, lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow...just wow! Good to read you here once again Corinne. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing...talk about time travel... with so few words, you've got my mind spinning... but that is how the good poets do it. Teach me. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks you guys! You are all so wonderful, so supportive, that's what I love about this place! Made my day with your warmth, you all did! Corinne |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice write! JL |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Always amazed by your work |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Corinne! This is a little beauty! ~ So ethereal! ~ and a very clever title! This sky-watcher enjoyed your poetic portrayal of a comet's tail! lol Warm hugs 'n smiles, EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
simply stunning! |
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