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Corinne
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0 posted 2004-04-12 09:33 PM


She is visible when the earth spins night your way –
when reflection reveals her light;

gaze directly at her, she’ll dodge from view.
Let your gaze grow velvety,
she’ll fan stars into a peacock’s tail

and leave you dreaming in ancient tongues.

© Copyright 2004 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-04-12 10:14 PM


Corinne
Sometimes you just surprise me.

swatcatpettus
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2 posted 2004-04-12 10:18 PM


so unrealistic its realistic
Dark Angel
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3 posted 2004-04-13 01:33 AM


I don't know what to say...just incredible Corinne..you totally blow me away.. IWICWLU

adding this to my library...
actually adding YOU to my library.

WOW

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-04-13 02:25 AM


great piece! glad to see you writing again
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5 posted 2004-04-13 10:32 AM


CorinneCorinne~
This is so total !

A flow off the tongue .... gorgeous, just gorgeous, lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2004-04-13 11:01 AM


Wow...just wow!
Good to read you here once again Corinne.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Sunshine
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7 posted 2004-04-13 11:02 AM


Amazing...talk about time travel...
with so few words, you've got my
mind spinning...

but that is how the good poets do it.

Teach me.

Corinne
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8 posted 2004-04-13 11:27 AM


Thanks you guys! You are all so wonderful, so supportive, that's what I love about this place!

Made my day with your warmth, you all did!

Corinne

JL
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9 posted 2004-04-13 01:33 PM


Very nice write!
JL

Aenimal
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10 posted 2004-04-13 02:19 PM


Always amazed by your work
Earth Angel
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11 posted 2004-04-13 02:41 PM


Hi, Corinne! This is a little beauty! ~ So ethereal! ~ and a very clever title!

This sky-watcher enjoyed your poetic portrayal of a comet's tail! lol

Warm hugs 'n smiles,
EA

LeeJ
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12 posted 2004-04-13 02:51 PM


simply stunning!
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