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THEMAGICALMYSTRYOFPOEMS
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0 posted 2004-04-12 02:45 PM


HE'S WALKING WITH THE ANGELS

An angel in a whirlwind
Will show their courage within

He reaches everyone
In his own captive world

He gives all his special gifts
In his own special ways

He is living deeper within
And captivates us all

Looking deep into my eyes
He takes me to the core
Of his soul

Now i realize
In his whirlwind
No energies are wasted

For the more that
Is taken away
The more precious
That is left

So much power
In the eyes
Of a child


© Copyright 2004 Marilyn Ciptak - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-12 04:13 PM


Agreed-- very good write!
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2 posted 2004-04-12 06:13 PM


Marilyn~
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww~
I love the very thought of little whirliwind angels~

Hey ... drop down to the Corner Pub #2 and post something for the members down there ... (no cross-posting of the same thing you've put in another forum ... but we'd love to have you join us there too)
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Juju
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3 posted 2004-04-12 07:08 PM


Good.

Smile

Juju

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4 posted 2004-04-12 07:24 PM


THEMAGICALMYSTRYOFPOEMS
Interesting read, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-04-13 03:29 AM


splendid!
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