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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
He looked at her, an old woman of hexes and potions Hidden away on a mountainside along a narrow trail, Selling cures and mixtures to stir the deep emotions Made by one of tangled hair and skin much too pale, Her that sleeps on dirty mats in a drafty shack “How can I be sure” he says “it will not fail” “If it does not,” she coos “ just bring it back, but be warned of who quaffs lingering devotion will never change and never fade or lack She will cling always with a loving never lost” And then she shouted to he retreating back “the antidote is four times the cost” Gloom |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Aha! Let the buyer beware! Good one Professor. Enjoyed. Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
much enjoyed as well Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Enjoyed. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
me too! i enjoyed as well |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Funny how those things work huh? Once someone loves you...I mean really... Yeah, antidote is four times the cost. Great write. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Loved this -- reminds of that old say, "be careful what you wish for, you might get it!"  jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 cool write |
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