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But A Step Unknown
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But A Step Unknown |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Then hear me Whatever comes, weather or change Think me unusual, brazen or strange This is good My dreams take life Such blind unhampered frolic soul deep Stripping out the futile, all the else to keep Love is stronger The complex core of bliss Limp and willow holds the candle to the flame Think me mellow, flexible is just the same The door is open So hold me Whatever fear is the illusion of tomorrow Here and now a step beyond the threshold there to borrow Thrive the wishes of the heart deprived of sorrow And smile lingers Captured and conveyed on silken fingers Running laugh lines up the spines of thrilling Think the best and keep the future willing This is now Copyright Kkh 4/12/04 |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
So hold me Whatever fear is the illusion of tomorrow Here and now a step beyond the threshold there to borrow Thrive the wishes of the heart deprived of sorrow And smile lingers Your whole poem read so naturally, but I really, really enjoyed the sounds and rhythm of the Here and now line. Beautifully composed. Sadie |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!! Eric |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 Im just going to sit right here and relax next to the flow. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A great poem-- very well written!  |
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vega Junior Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 24wherever I lay my hat. |
Excellent writing, well done. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
wish I could put then together like you TD... glad I at least get to read them from you.... mucho enjoyed...jwesley |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
TD - I was going to try to find my favourite lines from this beautiful write, but I love all of it! Library bound! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A wonderful sense of optimism here, ThisDiamond, well written and hopeful! Corinne |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very uplifting! |
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