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Obedience |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
"Heard about the goblin that kidnaps lazy wives? Your comportment stabs me like a bunch of knives I am a farmer of the field bound to bring food home to sooner fly from the hive like a defeated drone". "I find you comfortably inclined with sweat on my brow I'll invite this creature and then you'll learn how; to keep hearth and home while I work the fields a small token to appreciate what the farm yields". The wife never listened, a shroud passed her view "Open your door so I can nab you little shrew"; grab her it did with the might of an extended arm as predicted by the husband to teach her some harm. He carried her aloft to a neighbouring cascade thought his stolen package would contain its rage; she boldly defended herself from imminent doom as if she held the reins on a flagship broom The demon slipped and fell to his nemesis below to the bottom of the falls where a river did flow; she was liberated, resolute to return to hearth and home to behave as a good farmer's wife and entertain her drone. © Copyright 2004 ecrivan [This message has been edited by wordwizard (04-12-2004 01:26 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well now... TD |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
wickedly funny and strange. nicely done. -majnu |
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