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Of Foxes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Foxes The fox in me has doubled back To walk upon my coming track But dust has formed a layer thick And I of course am not as quick It takes me to a place I’ve been Back into a former green And as I search about the field There seems to me a musty yield Things have changed, a look of gray And yesterday is not today The trees in moss has grown in hang The taste of air has lost its tang Sadness seems to hang in lace The rose is gone and left a space And I am in a clime of age Like yellow turns in time a page I do not like its Coventry Nor do I like the pageantry |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A contemplative writing, m'friend. A Blessed Easter to you and yours.   |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I'd say that you are a wise fox~ Easter morning blessings to you and yours, my friend~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Happy Easter Sy. You've given us much to ponder this morning. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write this Easter morn Sy! May you and yours have a blessed Easter. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Hugs Seymour !! Chris |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Nor do I, but I really did like your poem, Seymour! ..........jo |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Seymour Tabin../\..always a pleasing experience, your poems.. spiros --------- |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Deep thoughts for me to contemplate this morning. well written, such beautiful imagery in this piece. ~Live and Laugh~ The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a little melancholic enjoyed the read Sy |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I learned so much from this writing...it is not what is said, but the way it is said that provokes one to think. You indeed made me think and rethink. Thanks... Patricia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you my sunshine. Marge, Perhaps a humble fox. scorpio Happy Easrer my friend. Chris Hugs back sweet. iliana And I really like your answer. Spiros Your replies make me happy. *Belabebeautiful Sometimes I laugh. passing It's what makes the soup tasty Patricia Thinking, one of the pleasues of freedom. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
You may not like that you are not as "quick" but as a young person I will tell you. iGNORANCE AND BEING NIEVE IS NOT COOL. I am quite wize for my age, but I am so nieve still. I get so angry at things I do. oh well. Juju |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Juju We all have our own rate of speed. Thank you for the read. |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Saymour, loved the metaphor of the fox! Once you have smelled a rose, you never forget the smell and are always capable of smelling again! Keep the rose alive! pictureme  |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
enjoyed the imagery..Happy Holidays Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
pictureme Thank you for the nice reply. wordwizard Thank you glad you enjoyed. |
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