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Open Poetry #31

The sounds here

Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

0 posted 2004-04-09 10:20 AM

Listen to the woods call,
The snow fall,
Do you hear at all?

The sounds here.

Listen to the moonlight,
The star bright,
They are right,

The sounds here.

Listen to the wolf howl,
The cat prowl,
They do not scowl,

The sounds here.

Listen to the trees sing,
The new spring,
They all bring,

The sounds here.

Listen to your heart beat,
The summer heat,
They are complete,

The sounds here.

Listen to the trees grow,
The wind blow,
Now you know,

The sounds here.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2004-04-09 11:01 AM

enjoyed this thanks

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-04-09 02:21 PM

Flows real nice!

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 2004-04-12 01:07 AM

So many sounds to hear, if only we'd take the time to really listen to all that the universe has to say. Awesome poem, made me listen for at least a minute. Thanks for sharing it here with us.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2004-04-12 03:03 AM

nicely described

Rosalind Palafox

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5 posted 2004-04-12 03:41 AM

I like the structure that you applied to your poem. You did a great job in describing nature. i absolutely love poems about nature. i could almost hear all those sounds calling now....

"Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

6 posted 2004-04-12 07:59 AM

You make me feel special!

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