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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2004-04-11 04:20 AM

river's swell
no dam to
quell the
torrent flowing
deep within the
madness
sadness
trickling with
discontent in
wondering and
questioning
of wandering
misguided in the
following of
heart in
spirit's
seek

-Vicky L. Raynes

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-04-11 04:32 AM

short and to the point

sad write I feel

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2004-04-11 04:39 AM

Drifting away, lost deep in a tranquil sadness, and carried away swiftly through trecherous waters, without anything to stop one. This poem drifts you away from the blue walls of pip and wiskes you away to a distant place and changes ones perspective to a piece of handcrafted driftwood. This poem painlessly glides you through the water. Good write.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2004-04-11 07:24 AM

yes miguided
but always seeking
i remain
a fan of your words that wrap the white

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-04-11 09:10 AM

Vicky~
You are not lost, for He knows your Spirit's need~

~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-04-11 09:23 AM

Vicky?

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-04-11 09:26 AM

Happy Easter dear Vicky!

You will never ever be lost...not to Him.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-04-11 09:29 AM

vlraynes

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-04-11 12:54 PM

What a talent -- you really got the point across well with the rhythm, words, and progression.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-04-11 12:57 PM

Vicky

I love you, my friend.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

10 posted 2004-04-11 01:24 PM

Absolutly beautiful write, this one touched me like none of your others. Such vivid emotion in this and such and such vibrant words yet given in such a quiet way, truley beautiful...
~Live and Laugh~

The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised.
~Bella~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2004-04-11 08:10 PM

nice write

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