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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-04-10 07:19 PM


predetermined actions inside your mind
hiding behind
the things you wish for  
yesterday i wanted everything ...
candy apple red cadillac with the top back
how selfish
now today i want nothing, as i am steady puffing
black and white , the lessons of life
yin and yang whiplash, a love smash aftermath
finger on the weapon,
half a second to detonation
calm lipped, cool trousers attitude
no relation
finds the right wire with...
pure sensations,  soft vibrations
swirling in a breath of fantasy, natural ecstasy  
to awake in the a.m. with you next to me
i am getting tired of the pile of pillows and
blankets i keep beside me in bed too
still hoping they will magically  transform
from these feathers to you




JDWolf III
4/10/2004

© Copyright 2004 James D Wolf III - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-04-10 07:24 PM


Oh...I wait for your writes now!

You put silk on the pillow talk...well dressed and a fine dine.
TD

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2 posted 2004-04-10 07:24 PM


Ah, yes-- a magnificent write... enjoyed very much!
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3 posted 2004-04-10 07:59 PM


Wonderful way you have writing down your thoughts & pulling the reader in.
Happy Easter, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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4 posted 2004-04-10 08:05 PM


Very very nicely penned...
Happy Easter, hugs, Nancy

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

iliana
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5 posted 2004-04-10 08:42 PM


Great poem!
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6 posted 2004-04-11 05:32 AM


*mouth hanging open*
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7 posted 2004-04-11 04:34 PM


I know the ache well.  Another great write, and a keeper...  ~K~
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8 posted 2004-04-11 05:47 PM


Td ..oh no don't say that lol you'll make me blush and a man never blushes lolll

Grover ..enjoyed your joy groves

Nightsahde...ahh the wolfy pull heheheee

enchantress...thanks and hugs to you too

iliana...and thank you too for the sweet reply ana

shadowbabe ... lmao here let me help u with that ..your soo funny  

Kahlil...i have speculated on your name for some time now , very unique indeed ...
a keeper !!!! no way  really !! your cool thanks


THANKS PIPSTERS much luv from the wolfmon


.......
JDW III

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