Open Poetry #31 |
Lassitudes |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
clawing in the win-ter-ger everything I once dreamt of digging for a dry WASP ditch... just a little bit of it-- itty bitty bitey bitch Lassitudes and longing too... damn I need to be sixteen. Wax the lips and pout-- agree? cover curl the yellowing of the smile of her defeat laughing through the laze... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Giving laissez faire to all... Good morning, midiK... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity Woukd not we all. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Morning serene one ! Awesome. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
stars in sighs and fingertips ya had me from the very first line. dont wanna be sixteen again tho...was hard enough the first time. Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Wax the lips and pout-- agree?" Agree!! Gawd you are so amazing! Love ya lady~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Wax the lips and pout" Too true -- awesome poem! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
stars in sighs and fingertips YESSssss...beautiful Gorgeous..beautiful. Mxx Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes you are hard to grasp, but I still love the way you write |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks for reading. You guys are great, and sorry about this one being confusing, I tend to make up words sometimes...Lassitudes? It's just a term I use for "female sass". Sheesh. Thanks again... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Doing the birthday bump from me library of rhyme divine Sen keepers. Its your day..the forums shall be your marquee |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Always love reading your stuff... Although, I am sixteen, and? in case you've forgotten, it isn't all it's (ahem) cracked up to be. Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
perhaps I should re-write this one as "assitudes"? Hugs Alyssa. |
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