Open Poetry #31 |
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Lassitudes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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clawing in the win-ter-ger everything I once dreamt of digging for a dry WASP ditch... just a little bit of it-- itty bitty bitey bitch Lassitudes and longing too... damn I need to be sixteen. Wax the lips and pout-- agree? cover curl the yellowing of the smile of her defeat laughing through the laze... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Giving laissez faire to all... Good morning, midiK... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity Woukd not we all. ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Morning serene one ! Awesome. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
stars in sighs and fingertips ya had me from the very first line. ![]() dont wanna be sixteen again tho...was hard enough the first time. ![]() ![]() Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Wax the lips and pout-- agree?" Agree!! Gawd you are so amazing! Love ya lady~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Wax the lips and pout" Too true -- awesome poem! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
stars in sighs and fingertips YESSssss...beautiful Gorgeous..beautiful. Mxx ![]() Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes you are hard to grasp, but I still love the way you write |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks for reading. You guys are great, and sorry about this one being confusing, I tend to make up words sometimes...Lassitudes? It's just a term I use for "female sass". Sheesh. Thanks again... ![]() |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Doing the birthday bump from me library of rhyme divine Sen keepers. Its your day..the forums shall be your marquee ![]() ![]() |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Always love reading your stuff... Although, I am sixteen, and? in case you've forgotten, it isn't all it's (ahem) cracked up to be. ![]() Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
![]() perhaps I should re-write this one as "assitudes"? ![]() Hugs Alyssa. |
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