navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #31 » True freedom.
Open Poetry #31
Post A Reply Post New Topic True freedom. Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
PhictiousReality
New Member
since 2004-04-10
Posts 4


0 posted 2004-04-10 03:42 AM


One thought.
Twenty questions to that single brought.
Is it react then taught?
My mind thought, freedom will be the next, which I love, the last to rott.

Mind [edit] is the enemys luck.
Understand that.
They question.
You have brought up. A muck!

Hate me why?
For true freedom I will die.
To me , I ask not my mind, but my soul.
For why do they lie? They hurt, yes I do understand why!

DNA is only a question away.
The truth was the before day.
If I had it my way?
For true beliefe and trust. I know where my soul lay.


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-10-2004 07:19 AM).]

© Copyright 2004 PhictiousReality - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-04-10 07:20 AM


Welcome to Passions, PR.  We hope you enjoy your time with us.  If you have any questions, or need help in locating our guidelines, discussion area, whatever, feel free to contact any moderator, and we'll be glad to help you get your bearings.
Nightshade
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
2 posted 2004-04-10 08:24 AM


Welcome To Passions!
Enjoyed your first post.
Looking forward to more of your poetry.
Have fun here !


Please check your e-mail for a special greeting !!     Chris

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-04-10 08:31 AM


Welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
4 posted 2004-04-10 08:46 AM


Welcome to Passions.  I enjoyed your first poem and hope to read more.

believe in what your heart feels...

muted
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
5 posted 2004-04-10 09:42 AM




Looking forward to reading more

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
6 posted 2004-04-10 10:00 AM


Some interesting thoughts here, such as:
when to be truthful, when to lie?
The mind accepts responsibility for what the soul believes.


WELCOME to Passions

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
7 posted 2004-04-11 10:39 AM


Welcome to Passions.
The articulation of such feelings leads me to respond, that true freedom lifts above the shackles of existence and floats the heart on the wings of the soul.
We are different, and all the same. Enjoyed.
ThisDiamond

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
8 posted 2004-04-11 11:21 AM


Welcome to PIP!  I'll be watching for more!
Juju
Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
9 posted 2004-04-11 11:44 PM


Welcome -

Your stuff looks cool.

-Juju

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #31 » True freedom.

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary