Open Poetry #31 |
Road Maps Read In Subtle Light |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
there is believing between lines of want to be there is awareness there is denial between anger and despair there is surrender there is becoming between points of loss and grief there is forgiveness ©2004 by icebox |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Box of Ice, you be a wise and knowing cartographer! Light the way! EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm keeping this, if you don't mind I may even copy this to a big poster and hang it on my wall...along with the small post-it I will put on my bathroom mirror |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox Now, it is I that feels humble. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Oh, Wise One, how true! I love how you captured just the right way to say it, and I'm keeping this, too. ~K~ |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Contrasts are amazing! Grover. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
No argument from me... Nicely said! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox All good points, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is so well done.. and I do love the presentation. Excellent. Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Enjoyed the read |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
wow...great write! Knew this one was going to be special when my browser only pulled up the first 2 lines and it exploded on my mind...wonderful! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yes you are sooo right |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Thank you all for taking time to read this and for your kind comments. I appreciate it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
needed this again today |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Well, what can I say...I went to the icebox to find some morsel to eat, and I found a full meal! Great poem! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
icebox, there is love between birth and death there is living! really enjoyed this one! thanx, pictureme |
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