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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2004-04-09 04:50 PM


I'm out of touch of blue
slipped into yellow so long ago
that the down-slide
was so slight, so slight
that I ought might
wrap red around myself  
so as not to clash in scheme.

Blue being a friend for so long
the sad song, the sad song
refrained into overtime, or overture
overdone, that's for sure
that it's departure should have been
         explosive!

Noticed, felt, a caress
not a melt, but at least
a more apt feeling,  
than a sad color leaving
replaced by the neutral of shade,
I mean yellow, happy, but drab,
of this I'm quite glad,
but blue, I miss blue,
and the tears.

WhiteRose 04/09/04


[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (04-09-2004 06:10 PM).]

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2004-04-09 05:12 PM


I think I know what you are talking about. back when I had so much anger in side I wrote poetry like it was no ones business, but know My life is actually happy ness and I have friends at school who support me and are actually friends. I can't write like I use to, but I am happy and that is good. once and a wile I will have alot of emotions, but that is what poetry for. Even though my life is great, I miss the way I use to write. now I must be inspied or so forth. You can bud with me in the spurts of genious poetry. lol. I am very glad you are happy.

Juju

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just out of reach
2 posted 2004-04-09 05:25 PM


Very nice to read your words WhiteRose.
Happy Easter. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-04-09 06:31 PM


Enjoyed this very much.

Susan

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
4 posted 2004-04-09 07:31 PM


Soft words, enjoyed this alot!
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