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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
beggar's meal spread o'er mahogany & silver goblets of gold run empty of wine silk & lace burned ashes when touched longed for kisses untasted when found dance hall filled with shadows of yester voices echoing some unknown past two broken hearts decked out fine & formal sit down to partake disillusion's repast ~R.T. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How good your words look to me on this special Friday... I have missed you very much, my friend. Welcome home!  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
That was really cool. I liked it alot. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely write. Nice to read you again! Hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This instantly took me back to "The Haunted Mansion" at Disneyland... Wonderful Tiersden, I've missed reading you. It's good to see you. Maree  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice style. Enjoyed this very much!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tier~This is beautifully penned. Much enjoyed the read..good to see you here once again. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"voices echoing some unknown past two broken hearts decked out fine & formal sit down to partake disillusion's repast" Tier...Good to read you again! Your words so often reflect the clouds I too find myself visiting. Stick around a bit huh? You've been missed...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed this write "two broken hearts decked out fine & formal sit down to partake disillusion's repast"  good to see you here again! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Tiersdin, this was so creative, and very haunting. Enjoyed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I felt this one deep |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks everyone. I've missed you all as well... ~Tier |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
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