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aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

0 posted 2004-04-09 11:26 AM

forest at night ...
looking into a deep empty
select morsels hand picked by your eye
see those things you think you need
a paper cut
you know where i go to cry
last time you were there to greet me
under the shade tree
a cool spot from all the heat
reminding me to breath to the beat
i desire your pressing body
just a little lean or a slight brush of skin
it shows in the color of the ink in which we type
of wishes whispered to the stars and moon

JDWIII
04/09/04

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2004-04-09 11:38 AM

loved this

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-04-09 11:51 AM

Just as the brush of limbs in the deep woods breeze...such sensual and subtle aspects please

Wonderful spaces and lines
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-04-09 12:42 PM

oh that is so cool!

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-04-09 07:58 PM

Great imagery!

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

5 posted 2004-04-09 10:08 PM

mgroves

thisdiamond

passingshadows

grover

thanks for the cool replys
happy you liked it

.......
JDW III

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

6 posted 2004-04-10 12:52 PM

"reminding me to breath to the beat"

"of wishes whispered to the stars and moon"

This is an awesome write.
You're able to reach right in and touch it.  That's what I strive for.
Excellent!  A keeper!  ~K~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2004-04-10 02:41 PM

this reminds me of the song by Eric Clapton...or at-least the verse

"if I could reach the stars, I'd pull one down for you" such a romantic touch you have...

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-04-10 03:02 PM

This touches me.

Susan

Rosalind Palafox

Registered

Member
Posts 88

9 posted 2004-04-12 04:06 AM

hmm...nice! i liked the way you added in there the slight passion.

"Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

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