Open Poetry #31 |
Midnight Of Blue |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yesterday's sound fill skies in midnight of blue, stars dance the shimmering moon. I trace memories silhouette on silvery waters. Ripples grow until reflections {of past} can no longer be seen. Stillness of night hears my heart call {to winds of change} Embracing warmth of evenings breeze, still touching memories of you. It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are Writing! Do you know how good it is to see a new poem from you? Of course you do! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes! What Karilea said ! Hugs dear poetess!! Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Ripples grow until reflections {of past} can no longer be seen." ~ Oh, yes! It is a blessing when unpleasant things from the past can no longer be seen! Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ This is sooooo softly beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ohhh, this one touches the heart and soul good to see your name here today |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Donna~ This is touching... and so surreal for me today.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I trace memories silhouette on silvery waters. Beautiful! love gem. xx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes touching.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Donna I have missed reading you! So good to see you here and this is wonderful!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am sitting here wishing I had more time to be here. You are all so very wonderful, thank you for your support, it means so very much to me. HUGS and peace. |
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Rosalind Palafox
Registered
MemberPosts 88 |
Your poem was beautiful and breath-taking...nicely described and easily pictured. Good work! "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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