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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-04-09 10:49 AM



+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+
Beetles, bugs and beelzebubs,
Flowers, frogs and fairies,
Toads and trees and tinkerbells,
All ring-around-the-Marys.

Silly, soppy and sippy sweet,
Jumping jacks in June,
Trilling tunes in tempost pots,
In merry month of moon.

Itsy, bitsy, thing-a-ma-jigs,
Slither hither and nigh,
I can't make sense of any of it,
So I shall not even try!
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+

© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-04-09 10:59 AM



But the three-year-olds love it!
This tripped on my tongue delightfully!

Toerag
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2 posted 2004-04-09 11:57 AM


LOL...great write gal...
(Balladeer kills those things yanno)

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-04-09 12:03 PM


Earth Angel
A delight to read.

Martie
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4 posted 2004-04-09 12:07 PM


EA

What Sy said!  

Susan
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5 posted 2004-04-09 02:59 PM


Great fun to read.  Loved the feel of the words as the tumbled in their playful way through my mind.

Susan

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6 posted 2004-04-09 08:48 PM


One of the things I like best about Passions is the way that poetry can influence mood.
This is darling-a touch of Springing play.


Penomous Verson
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7 posted 2004-04-09 09:44 PM


unique... im diggin it

love & respect
penverse

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8 posted 2004-04-09 09:47 PM


Made me feel like dancin' a wee jig this did!
Love it Linda.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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9 posted 2004-04-09 10:19 PM


oh this is cute! im going to have to get trent to read it
jwesley
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10 posted 2004-04-09 10:36 PM


gonna save this to read to Ryleigh (in my picture)

jwesley

Trent
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11 posted 2004-05-08 05:18 AM


"Itsy, bitsy, thing-a-ma-jigs,"

thats the bestest line in the poem!

Trent

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