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Halloween |
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Trent Junior Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 12Perth, Western Australia |
I like halloween because it's scary The food looks yucky and scary but its actually nice I like the carved pumpkins I eat their guts on rice. We dress like vampires and devils we are going to use black balloons and paint i like the spiders on their web they will make my mommy faint! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Just a little note let everyone know that Trent is my son (almost 8 years old) and this is the very first poem he has ever written! and he is very excited! it only took a tiny smidge of guidance from me  VERY good job Trent!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Trent! I will be looking for more of your poetry, very soon! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS TRENT! Your first post here is really good. I know you will enjoy it here and have fun! Please check your e-mail for a special Passions welcome. ~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Hey Trent! Very good job with your first poem. I love halloween also! Susan |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions Trent !! I really enjoyed your first post ! Have fun here ! Chris |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhTrent~ WELCOME TO THE CIRCLE~ What a FUN write~ I vote with your mommy on those spiders ... they scare me too~  *Huglets* to you~  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Pass the candy and hold the guts! Welcome Trent, this was lots of fun to read. |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
mmmm candied guts ... *drools* hehehe loved the poem Trent |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 YEAH! Great first poem! I'm so happy that you have come to be with us here, Trent! Keep writing! |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
^*-Trent-*^ Welcome to Passions honey. I'm sure that you will like it here. Excellent first post.. watch out for the spiders!  ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
awww sweet talent indeed runs in the family....welcome!! ~~**~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Pumpkin guts? LOL, that is hilarious. Nice to meet you, Trent! Make sure you repost this one again in October, it's a great pumpkin poem. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A great first go, Trent... wonderful sense of humor! Welcome to PIP! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome Trent--I very much enjoyed this... |
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Trent Junior Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 12Perth, Western Australia |
Thank you everyone for writing about my poem  Trent |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Hi Trent....this place goes fast...so I'm  booting this back to the top so others can meet you  I'll be looking for another poem from you, okay? |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Trent...I'm so glad you posted your first poem here. Welcome!!! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Trent, you rock, Dude! Welcome to a life-long habit you will never want to break! Great poem!! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is really good! Great write here! Welcome! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Trent, this is such a cool poem about Halloween...I see talent runs in the family. Keep writing young man  I'm looking forward to reading more from you.Maree What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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velociraptor Junior Member
since 2003-07-23
Posts 12 |
Hi Trent, I really enjoyed your poem about halloween. The part about your mummy fainting made me laugh Daniel  |
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