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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2004-04-08 03:19 PM

Came Spring
and grey hairs did not revel naked
in sunlight as they had in years
when delight was found in flesh
tempting flesh against cool earth
to sate the season of birth
fertile finds of lust or crave
to simply touch someone

Now
the sun touches spots
aged on exposed skin
and I touch memories of white water
of cool nights with fires that swept sparks into the air
chasing brilliant stars

tell me
how many more will I see
to live regret for all I failed
to find
in the iris of your eyes?

I find even the daffodils are bowed
in weep of dew consideration
and know only the silence of green

Should this be my last
I beg only my dear
the words I have shared
also be scattered
Come some Spring

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-04-08 03:22 PM

and I touch memories of white water

~*~

I think the tender
of this beauty
will cause many a
white water tear
to fall...

it is gentle, and
so very lovely...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-04-08 04:09 PM

Ron

"Should this be my last
I beg only my dear
the words I have shared
also be scattered
Come some Spring"

Sad...yet beautiful.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-04-08 04:43 PM

" I find even the daffodils are bowed
in weep of dew consideration
and know only the silence of green

Should this be my last
I beg only my dear
the words I have shared
also be scattered
Come some Spring"

You did it...you made the tears overflow.
Thank you for this keeper Captain.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2004-04-08 05:31 PM

and I touch memories of white water
of cool nights with fires that swept sparks into the air
chasing brilliant stars

tell me
how many more will I see
to live regret for all I failed
to find in the iris of your eyes?''''
~~

knowing this feeling well....may the spring breeze blow softer upon your heart...

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-04-08 06:33 PM

In it's sadness Ron, this is really very beautiful.

I love reading you.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2004-04-08 07:27 PM

Hi Ron,

You do have the magic touch, yes you do.

I covet these lines:

and I touch memories of white water
of cool nights with fires that swept sparks into the air
chasing brilliant stars

Hope all is well in your neck 'o the woods.

Corinne

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

7 posted 2004-04-08 11:03 PM

And nothing more valuable than a day.

pleasure Cap'n

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2004-04-09 10:13 PM

enjoyed this, moment-by-moment, line-by-line

touching the blue screen, letting you know
this write touched me

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2004-04-20 04:17 PM

I find even the daffodils are bowed
in weep of dew consideration
and know only the silence of green

Should this be my last
I beg only my dear
the words I have shared
also be scattered
Come some Spring

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oh yessssss.... I wasnt about to miss this one.

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