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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-04-08 09:26 AM

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I see no need to dispense those feels
that rise with me and want their out.
For no one knows what in me reels,
those turning inside, holds of doubt.

This dawn appears in shades of gray
with more to come and toil within.
I run from it, but bands me stay,
stretched I am, on thoughts too thin.

I play on words concealed between
those lines unborn, that hide just so.
Forgetting what the time has seen,
brought once upon in darkness show.

I hear those birds that bare their want
so early when the morning comes.
Another day of which to taunt
and push their will till I succumb.

Becoming who I should become
and doing what I should to do.
Changing this, the day's ho hum
into the start of routine new.

Another day to forward move,
if only to myself to prove.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

1 posted 2004-04-08 09:41 AM

Another day to forward move,
if only to myself to prove.

ah....forward stepping looks good on you...and you write it well......love this

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-04-08 09:45 AM

Becoming who I should become
and doing what I should to do.
Changing this, the day's ho hum
into the start of routine new.

Another day to forward move,
if only to myself to prove.

Hi Maureen,
I hope you will have a very good day today,
and that all will be well. My thoughts and
prayers are with you.

Hugs,

Ethel

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-04-08 10:01 AM

Hi, Maureen! I would like to express how impressed (for what that's worth!) I am with yet another one of your emotive writes! You use such an unusual and creative turn of words that creates lasting images and emotions that linger long after I have read your poetry. You have quite a gift!

Warm, springtime hugs,
Linda

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2004-04-08 12:48 PM

agree with jellybeans
good write
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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