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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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those same old notes play again like the dream i hade last night we were all there in an auditorium always the same vision mountain house mystery palace it seemed like it would never end floor after floor ..hallways and doorways friends i have never met in reality searching for the answer where is the window a view of beauty everlasting flooding emotions lost in thought her hand touched mine so real caught between worlds which is which ? my mind is changing moving ideas ...letting go hard to let them go so hopeless sometimes ... wanting to do so much , these pictures in my mind ....keep me for there own memories wished on waters reflect ourselves truths lost in the downpouring rains am i awaiting destiny, to refill my life ? 4/07/2004 JDWIII ....... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed this look within/without you always offer a pondering write, m'friend |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
my mind is changing moving ideas ...letting go hard to let them go so hopeless sometimes ... wanting to do so much , these pictures in my mind ....keep me for there own memories wished on waters reflect ourselves truths lost in the downpouring rains'' ~~ you hit home with these lines...it is so hard sometimes to really let go....ohhhh I believe a lot will relate to this...hugsss for brighter days, and lasting memories ~~**~~ |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Me liked. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
dreams do amplify what the subconcious harbours....i enjoyed your sharing of images/emotions.... alot of us ask that question, "am i awaiting destiny, to refill my life ?" patience is the only requirement  , but harder said than done!another good one here  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Enjoyed this Mr Wolf Nice to read you again. Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
midnight ...nice of u to say that thanks friend ...happy to ponder with yougreeneyes ..the hug was needed thank ya babe thanks for bein here juju... like your name and your reply muted...dreams oh sweet dreams ..yes patience is a virtue , lol easier said than done ...thanks d angel... delighted that you found me to read , Miss Maree ..and that you enjoyed it too cutie ....... JDW III |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I understandthank you for sharing |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I love reading about other peoples dreams, and how they interpret them. I keep a dream diary because i find them so interesting, and always intuitive. I love how complex our brains are, even when we're supposed to be at rest. Enjoyed this very much. gem xx |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."wished on waters reflect ourselves truths lost in the downpouring rains am i awaiting destiny, to refill my life ? " There is such interplay between shadow and light, that the final line of this was a striking creshendo to the entire write. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed the intimacy of you sharing your dream with the reader. I have had a similar one, mind you it was a "his" hand! lol ~ May all your dreams be sweet and be reflections of your reality!  EA |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
passing ... thanks for understanding with me your reply means alot gem ...your so right babe , oh if you liked that one just wait , last nights dream was even better , omg ..lol i found dracula , and yes it was spooky ...lata xoxo wolf Tdiamond ... oh my gizzy ..thats so cool because i was wondering if that line even fit at the end ...it had to go there , but as the poet when you keep looking at the same words or whatever you just wrote ..well sometimes it starts to look different, so blah blah blah , thanks for making me feel good for leaving that there big smiles Earthy angel .....awesome ...i know what u are saying ..lol glad to hear the hand touched you ..dreams are so magical.. jw....... |
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