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A Deal
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A Deal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Deal I’ve made a deal with time and space By using a chameleon’s lace Set the sight and stage of play And change the scene most every day. What I won’t is out of sight Change the meanings. Change the light. Change the entrée and the force By way of chameleon of course I see no thorn I see the rose I see no anger but impose I dally on the end of bend And send improper back to mend I see the birds and not the turd I see the cream and not the curd I thereby make an Eden’s world One that’s good and new unfurled I also have a deal with real Parameters, of course ideal |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I see no thorn I see the rose I see no anger but impose I dally on the end of bend And send improper back to mend ~*~ I like your slice of cake today here's some tea to set the sway that all should heed your sound advice so be no need to set it twice.   |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed the poem And admire the viewpoint Gloom |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your words are to be forever framed....there is always a soft tone to your voice, and a lesson learned...Thank you for the morning cup of coffee...Good morning Sy..wishing you and yours a wonderful Easter Holiday |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What I won’t is out of sight Change the meanings. Change the light. Change the entrée and the force By way of chameleon of course =============================== Youre the coolest chameleon I know... and your dragon aint half bad either..lol  *ww*   |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Optimism abounds in this write, Sy. Enjoyed!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You have such a positve outlook dear Sy! Loved this mornings offering. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mornin', T-Man! I suppose you right well know which line got a guffaw out of this little "angel"! lol Now, about those "parameters", I don't think it is necessary for you to limit yourself in any way! That would only cramp your style and limit our pleasure!  EA |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, I like to see the birds, too, my dear. LOL I love this one, but I love all your others, too. heehee Thanks for the good advice this morning. With love and hugs,  Ethel |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I was feeling grumpy until this poem made me smile. Thanks!  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
a wonderful cup filled to the brim with optimism; (to the library for a rainy day!) Thank you, Sy! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You are so sweet, hugs. Professor, Would you like a slice of cake? LOL LeeJ The same to you my dear, hugs and all that stuff. JM, Miss you miss you miss you. WWRS scorpio Glad you enjoyed my friend. Nancy, Love you dear. Earth Angel Now you're making me laugh. Ethel, Love and hugs back. Martie You're almost too sweet to eat. LOL Sadelite You are a sweetheart. vandana Thank you dear. |
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