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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2004-04-07 11:03 AM


******I'm sorry this poem doesn't rhyme or anything like that.....I've been going through some really tough times right now and just need to get all of this out.*****


Why is it that I feel intense hatred for you?It is because of what you have done to me....I can't even believe i'm asking myself this question.Knowing you has been the worst mistake of my life, why is it that you like to watch me squirm?What did I ever do to do that was "wrong"?

I hope to God you die the most horrible death there is on the face of this earth and when you do.....I hope you go exactly where I want you to go.

My friend Lisa says I should forgive you for what you have done to me.Maybe I should I don't know.Right now there is only one person I need to be with but come Friday, I will be left with nothing.


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JL
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1 posted 2004-04-07 11:20 AM


No rhyme needed here.  Sometimes it really helps just to put your thoughts to pen and paper, and let it all rip.  Good one!
JL


ParisGrl
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2 posted 2004-04-07 11:59 AM


JL,

Thanks for reading.  Take Care.

~Laura~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-04-07 12:35 PM


I have felt that...many times...

it's not good for either one of us though, I just don't know how to fix it

MGROVES
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4 posted 2004-04-07 04:21 PM


i too feel like this often but sometimes  forgiveness  is like death to them. as they cant forgive, themselves or others, but for your self forgiveness does help to heal  


      


Grover
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5 posted 2004-04-07 04:28 PM


When you're hurt and angry forgiveness is the last thing on your mind. But you must strive to forgive. Only forgiveness can bring peace of mind.
ParisGrl
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6 posted 2004-04-08 02:58 PM


I'm sorry I don't have the time to respond to each of you but I would like to thank you for reading this.  It means alot to me right now to have replies like these and to know that i'm not going through these feelings alone.  

Take Care,
~Laura~

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