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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-04-07 07:42 PM

Under Red Umbrella
(In A Rainstorm)

Her red umbrella was a welcome sight
for one so far from home, as she
called to him, an American tourist that
had just arrived from the City of Rome.
On rain soaked streets two souls meet, an
American and a playful French madmemoisille.
Under red umbrella we walked the streets,
where silky raindrops softly fell.
A rainy day kiss warmed up the level
of happinesss and tenderness.
As she pulled me close to heart,
I gave in to her sweet caress.
Passing all around us, colorful
buses and sleek citreon cars.
On this lovely day, the French
Riviera in a rainstorm was ours.

JamesLee
April05
2004

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-04-07 09:18 PM

sounds like a very sweetly romantic scene

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2004-04-08 12:16 PM

Smiles

Juju

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2004-04-08 12:20 PM

what a passion moment!
so soft the image!

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2004-04-08 03:34 AM

Love it James

Great images in the rain...Cool man!

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-08 03:40 AM

you can write about anything if it has something to do with a woman...amazing...love it!

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

6 posted 2004-04-08 11:58 AM

Like the write James. Maybe I'll think on it and write about my umbrella of lavender. Cover with little shoes, purses, sun glasses
and many fun filled clips. When someone sees this umbrella they say, " That must be Bonnie's."
See Ya
Bon-Bon

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2004-04-08 12:44 PM

Bus stop, wet day, she's there I say
Please share my umbrella
Bus stop, bus go, she stays love grows
Under my umbrella
All that summer we enjoyed it
Wind and rain and shine
That umbrella we employed it
By August she was mine.... a young graham nash and the hollies
an oldie, but such a goodie
as ure words too

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-04-08 01:04 PM

Ahhh love this romantic moment James!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-08-29 04:25 AM

Thank you all for the nice responses...James

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