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Ringo's Callenge - 12th poem from above
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Ringo's Callenge - 12th poem from above |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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And that happened to be....Marge's Alice thru Glass /pip/Forum88/HTML/000330.html am I a lucky Dutchie. Challenge is to write something about this topic. Here I go.... Slowly it creeps under your skin True friendship you feel deep within It doesn't brag, it doesn't yell It's quietly feeding your ego well Don't have to talk or write each day True friendship speaks in it's own way It's there when needed, never forsakes It's drinking tea and eating cakes Laughing at a joke being told It's comforting in a tender hold True friendship is a two-way street You know it's there when soulmates meet Be careful not to waste it's gift Life's too short and time's too swift This one is for all the true friendships I found in Passion's blue   Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (01-31-2004 04:59 PM).] |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Great job! I, too, took this challenge,,but,,only got one reply, lol take care Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Titia- This is absolutely superb, and you haev done this challenge a great honor. Slowly it creeps under your skin This is one of the most descriptive lines I've seen on here in a while. Great job. Cause in my dreams it's always there |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Titia, this is really good and so true, too. Challenge is well met!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
This is so great Titia. I don't know about the challenge thingie, but I really like what this says about friendships. Too true. You said it best in the very last line, dear. McLean |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, and I'm so blessed to have you as a friend in my heart forever, sweet friend, God Bless You, you are a poetic inspiration to us all Titia, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I love it Titia... and thank you for your friendship ~Alice ( M) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Titia beloved sister of my soul, Oh my why is do you think that whenever I think of friendship, true friendship it seems to carry within it a taste of you? Possibly because whenever I read your words I see within my minds eye your smile and KNOW that I have a true friend. Utterly, utterly outstanding writing, I do come and fill my soul with delight you know, but normally I stay in the shadows. Just occasionally I visit you all in open, instead of scuttling straight off to the archives, but wherever I go I always read your work and marvel at the consistently brilliance of your art. as always Mushy   Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TitiaLove~ My blessings are measured in the full of truest friends ... and you KNOW you encircle me with your true measure~ Love this ... and you even MORE~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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